I Wish You Where Here (Rough Edit)

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Below is a very rough edit (presented in chronological order, not the “sequence” of the book). I’m thinking 20-25 might make the cut. Have a look (for fun, or for critique / editing) and let me know what you think.

Also, here’s a .pdf of the Blurb dummy I did a while back (featuring a poorly written / edited “statement”):

I Wish You Where Here (73mb / .pdf)

I’m not completely sold on my initial sequence. It seems … obvious. Have a look, perhaps print it out and play (if you like).

Ok! Talk to you soon.

L